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Post by mauvais on Mar 1, 2007 18:59:14 GMT -5
Unadorned by her laughing eyes And fake expressions Expressions from a storybook Stare back at her from the mirror What do they see that I don’t Or I do that they don’t Across the room are his crooked teeth And nose of clay… and eyes The fire behind his imperfection Makes the imperfection feel so right What is it, why don’t you stare A quick glimpse and I’ll stop looking But let my eyes look into yours Have the secrets of yours For a moment long enough A moment long enough The future is a picture framed By gilded wood that smells like cherries I could have sung, I could have showed To him that I am pretty
I stopped writing after that. I feared too much discovery of things in myself that I don't like admitting.
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Post by chinchillathekilla on Mar 1, 2007 20:57:40 GMT -5
Dude. That's dark.
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Post by mauvais on Mar 4, 2007 15:09:44 GMT -5
'Dark."? Elaborate, Chilla...
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Post by chinchillathekilla on Mar 8, 2007 10:01:45 GMT -5
I suppose it's both. But more dark. A lot of the poems people did on the theme report were pretty dark, too.
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Post by wetpaint on Mar 9, 2007 0:13:57 GMT -5
I don't get it. Why would you like a guy with crooked teeth?
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Post by mauvais on Mar 29, 2007 22:06:59 GMT -5
I think they're cute.
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Post by emeraldqueen on Apr 12, 2013 2:20:58 GMT -5
I don't get it. Why would you like a guy with crooked teeth? what a wit this wetpaint guy
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